LEVERAGE FIC. Quinn has been chased after for a while when he remembers that favor the team/Eliot ows him and takes advantage of it. After all it's hard to save your own life all by yourself.
Due to college I have to put this fic on hold. I will try and work on it again after I graduate though!
The Favor to Ask
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 29.08.2013
Letzte Änderung: 21.11.2013
Letzte Änderung: 21.11.2013
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Englisch
2766 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
2766 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
Hauptcharaktere: Quinn
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 29.08.2013 U: 21.11.2013 |
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| Prolog Prolog | E: 30.08.2013 U: 30.08.2013 |
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| Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 21.11.2013 U: 21.11.2013 |
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I'm honestly surprised that nobody's commented on this before. Well let's remedy that, shall we?
Right off the bat, I'll have to admit to not knowing the TV-series at all. Still I decided to have a read - be it only because of your chosen language. And Heavens, was I not disappointed.
I'm going to assume that you're not a native speaker and with that in mind I can only applaud your fluency and your choice of words. The entire piece reads very easily. The dialogue seemed very authentic thanks to the multitude of colloquial expressions that you used and the way you chose to deviate from stiff, formal speech.
As I've pointed out, I don't know the characters and yet you somehow managed to portray them in a way, that makes it easy to understand them individually and recognise dominant personality traits.
A minor point of criticism however: a few spelling mistakes seemingly escaped you or your proof-reader. One example might be "definately" or "scowlled" and "Itanians".
Apart from those minor lapses, I found the piece very enjoyable and would be quite chuffed to see it continued.
Best regards ~Kami
Right off the bat, I'll have to admit to not knowing the TV-series at all. Still I decided to have a read - be it only because of your chosen language. And Heavens, was I not disappointed.
I'm going to assume that you're not a native speaker and with that in mind I can only applaud your fluency and your choice of words. The entire piece reads very easily. The dialogue seemed very authentic thanks to the multitude of colloquial expressions that you used and the way you chose to deviate from stiff, formal speech.
As I've pointed out, I don't know the characters and yet you somehow managed to portray them in a way, that makes it easy to understand them individually and recognise dominant personality traits.
A minor point of criticism however: a few spelling mistakes seemingly escaped you or your proof-reader. One example might be "definately" or "scowlled" and "Itanians".
Apart from those minor lapses, I found the piece very enjoyable and would be quite chuffed to see it continued.
Best regards ~Kami
Antwort von: abgemeldet
07.05.2014 16:38
Thank you so much! Yes, I don't think Leverage is as popular in Germany as it is in the US, so that might be why nobody ever bothered reading through it.
Well, at least you did and I am really grateful for the spellonh errors you discovered. There is no one reading over my stuff and my computer just marks everything as misspelled. No matter how many times I read over my own stuff, I never find all the mistakes, so now I can get to correcting them right away, thanks again!
Since I am pretty busy right now there probably won't be another chapter anytime soon. If you have the patience though I'd be excited to hear how you like whatever I write next!
Well, at least you did and I am really grateful for the spellonh errors you discovered. There is no one reading over my stuff and my computer just marks everything as misspelled. No matter how many times I read over my own stuff, I never find all the mistakes, so now I can get to correcting them right away, thanks again!
Since I am pretty busy right now there probably won't be another chapter anytime soon. If you have the patience though I'd be excited to hear how you like whatever I write next!
I hardly watch TV at all and when I do I usually go for BBC and ITV OR HBO and Showtime produced shows/series.
I know the spell-check problem on the pc so I get it... Getting a beta might help?
And I am most definitely going to check out whatever you decide to put up on the web, so I'll be watching you.
I know the spell-check problem on the pc so I get it... Getting a beta might help?
And I am most definitely going to check out whatever you decide to put up on the web, so I'll be watching you.
