Those are some drabbels about Fye and his smiles.
The drabbels may be from different POVs.
SMILE
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 15.10.2005
Letzte Änderung: 16.10.2005
Letzte Änderung: 16.10.2005
nicht abgeschlossen (10%)
Englisch
355 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
355 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 15.10.2005 U: 16.10.2005 |
Kommentare (3 ) 355 Wörter |
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Kapitel 1 China Doll | E: 15.10.2005 U: 16.10.2005 |
Kommentare (2) 243 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Kapitel 2 Step by Step | E: 15.10.2005 U: 16.10.2005 |
Kommentare (1) 114 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Von: abgemeldet
2007-04-01T23:06:41+00:00
02.04.2007 01:06
A great idea to compare Fai with an china doll! ^.^
It fits, especially Kurowanko making this comparison.
What I liked most was that the tears on the dolls face were from another person and not from the doll itself.
Maybe implicating that Kurogaksei might be the one crying if something should happen to Fai? (well, alright he didn't cried on certain events in recent chapters but still)
Anyway thanks for sharing this inspiration :D
It fits, especially Kurowanko making this comparison.
What I liked most was that the tears on the dolls face were from another person and not from the doll itself.
Maybe implicating that Kurogaksei might be the one crying if something should happen to Fai? (well, alright he didn't cried on certain events in recent chapters but still)
Anyway thanks for sharing this inspiration :D
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: China Doll
Von: abgemeldet
2006-12-02T18:45:23+00:00
02.12.2006 19:45
hey! because I think you're quiet funny, I will give you the great pleasure and write the first comment and in english! But my English is not soooooo good! please be gentle and and read it! But I know it has been a time since you've written this text so I'm not sure whether you will read this! But if you read this, I will ask you a favour: Would you please read my story about fye and kurogane? I know it was advertisement but I would like to know what you think about my story it's true I think you're a really good writter and i love fye so much and kuro is the only one who will undertand kurogane that's the only possilbility^^! And please forgive me that my story is written in german^^
bye darky
bye darky
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: China Doll
Von: abgemeldet
2005-10-30T00:59:45+00:00
30.10.2005 02:59
Mmh... Noch was von dir ^^ Es gefällt mir irgendwie... Obwohl ich von der Kürze der Kapitel und vom Englisch verwirrt bin. ^__^" Ich lese eigentlich nur noch Englische FFs (Die sind halt klasse und in Masse vorhanden XD), aber das Deutsche englische FFs schreiben und diese dann auch nur so veröffentlichen... Kinda weird... Vielleicht schreibst du sie gleichzeitig auch auf Deutsch? *vor sich hin philosophierend verschwind*
Dat
-Ma-Chan-
Dat
-Ma-Chan-
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 2: Step by Step